Henry Just Can't Catch a Break

17th Aug 2020, 12:00 AM
Henry Just Can't Catch a Break

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LuckyFoot223 17th Aug 2020, 12:00 AM
Of course Maevin is gonna tease him a bit.

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jamie59 17th Aug 2020, 12:33 AM
But they didn't get anything out of him. So I don't think they're very pleased.

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LuckyFoot223 17th Aug 2020, 8:44 AM
Honestly, I think the only good pun is a bad pun. The one that makes your skull ache just a little.

Thanks for your comment!

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LuckyFoot223 17th Aug 2020, 8:46 AM
Xalteans have their own ways and these two are part of the main arc so you'll be seeing more of them.

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Myk Streja 17th Aug 2020, 7:56 AM
You already know what I think of Henry, so I'll save the tirade for another day. Sheesh! Nice work, thanks.

"Do with what" is technically correct but awkward. "Do with as" fits better. Dealer's choice.

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LuckyFoot223 17th Aug 2020, 8:46 AM
Thanks for your comment! I know your thoughts on Henry, which I appreciate that you shared in the past. I've actually gone through the next few chapters and brought forward more why he acts like this and move his personality arc up so he's more likable for some of the viewers.

The word choice was set to be awkward because I wanted to show Maevin trying to use English. She's not using a translator of any type though they do exist in this world. It's a type of "I'm learning about you" type situation.

As always, I appreciate each and every comment you make!

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NatureKid01 31st Aug 2020, 6:20 PM
maan this is just like Highschool Dxd series ^^ .
Love nudity content in webcomic like this ^^

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LuckyFoot223 2nd Sep 2020, 8:14 AM
Thanks for the compliment! I've past it on to my artist. We really appreciate that you like this comic!