Beloved Chains

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LuckyFoot223 14th Feb 2021, 12:00 AM edit delete

Hey all! Just when you thought Henry was in the clear. He's getting a bit better but catching a maid by surprise was well...surprising. What's he gonna do?

Also, we're going to start releasing on Sunday from now on instead of Monday. Also, there are only a few more pages left before we go on a hiatus to build up our stock of pages for Issue #3 but I'm working on some things to put in between until then. :)

Thanks again for all of you who have stayed with me through the up and down and please consider voting and supporting us in Top Web Comics.

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jamie59 14th Feb 2021, 8:18 PM edit delete reply

The cage?

Don't you know he'll go out of his way not to punish you? But I can think of a few ways that'll fit the crime.

jawbone 15th Feb 2021, 3:04 PM edit delete reply

He should put 'em in the cage with the soft pillows and the comfy chair and food and drink, and maybe even peacock feathers.

LuckyFoot223 16th Feb 2021, 9:24 AM edit delete reply

If the past pages were any sign, as much as they love their comfort, Xalteans have a cruel and vicious streak when the rules are broken.

Siv probably has a reason to be terrified. :D

Thank you all for the comments!

LuckyFoot223 16th Feb 2021, 9:24 AM edit delete reply

Yeah but this is Henry. LOL

Thank you for the comment!

jamie59 16th Feb 2021, 8:20 PM edit delete reply

You double replied but didn't say anything about "The Cage".

LuckyFoot223 17th Feb 2021, 3:10 PM edit delete reply

Hey! Thanks for catching that. I deleted the duplicate comment. There is not much to go into the Cage right now as I haven't fully fleshed it out. It's one of the scene locations in the Visual Novel so I don't have much more than as beautiful and easy going the Xaltean are, they are vicious when needed.

Hypatia 17th Feb 2021, 12:01 AM edit delete reply

Hi LuckyFoot!

Just a suggestion: The second panel has the Master saying: "I'll have lunch brought to the library, Master." Perhaps he should be saying "I'd like to have something to eat."

Also, the last panel says: "Take care of that yourself. I'm going to get punished ..."

????? Take care of what ????

LuckyFoot223 17th Feb 2021, 3:14 PM edit delete reply

Hypatia! Thank you for taking the time to comment. I really appreciate it.

Congrats for catching my "Doh!" moment. Both myself, the artist, and the beta reader missed it. LOL

That "that" is was a subtle sex reference since they were caught In flagrante delicto so the dude was not quite...done if ya get my drift. She was telling him that he'll have to solve that specific problem with his anatomy by himself. :D

I appreciate the time you took to point out these things. I appreciate the feedback.

Hypatia 20th Feb 2021, 6:56 PM edit delete reply

Hi LuckFoot! Anytime, thank you for the compliment! I am always happy to help.

LuckyFoot223 26th Feb 2021, 8:32 PM edit delete reply

And the new page has been uploaded and fixed!

Really? In the Library?

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